{"slug":"editing-contest-7","title":"壮观的风光大片，更需要视觉引导 - 修图小赛第7期点评","author":"Thomas看看世界","date":"2019-03-22","wechat":"https://mp.weixin.qq.com/s?__biz=MzI4NDA5MzE5NQ==&mid=2247488565&idx=1&sn=45132af0c0a472a6db3a4ae0cc7130d0&chksm=eb81ea51dcf66347e752e947dd2fa6dcad24e31f2561dd00bfa968b7f9be651a51af738086b0&scene=21#wechat_redirect","blocks":[{"t":"h","x":"Thomas看看世界","xe":"Thomas Chu Photo"},{"t":"p","x":"前期是谱曲，后期是演奏。同一张原图，不同摄影师的后期结果也会不一样。不同思路的碰撞会很有趣。","b":false,"xe":"The pre-shoot is composing, and post-processing is performing. From the same original, different photographers produce different results. The collision of different ideas is fascinating."},{"t":"p","x":"让我们再来回顾一下第7期活动的原图，是百内国家公园的湖边小树构图（原图下载地址见《修图小赛第7期 - Marc Adamus经典机位，你要来挑战下吗？》）。","b":false,"xe":"Let's review the original from the 7th contest: a composition of a small tree by a lake in Torres del Paine National Park (original download address in \"Photo-Editing Mini-Contest, Episode 7 - Marc Adamus's Classic Location, Want to Take Up the Challenge?\" (《修图小赛第7期 - Marc Adamus经典机位，你要来挑战下吗？》))."},{"t":"p","x":"为了增加这次挑战的难度，此次小赛一共提供了4张构图和拍摄时间，都稍有不同的原片。","b":false,"xe":"To increase the difficulty of this challenge, the contest provided a total of 4 originals with slightly different compositions and shooting times."},{"t":"img","f":"img-02","w":1000,"h":667},{"t":"p","x":"这里最先由美国著名风光摄影师Marc Adamus发现。他的作品风靡社交网络，从此这里成为了风光摄影爱好者的打卡圣地。","b":false,"xe":"This spot was first discovered by renowned American landscape photographer Marc Adamus. His works went viral on social networks, and since then it has become a check-in pilgrimage site for landscape photography enthusiasts."},{"t":"img","f":"img-03","w":1080,"h":684},{"t":"h","x":"精选奖获奖作品","xe":"Selection Award winning works"},{"t":"img","f":"img-04","w":1080,"h":721},{"t":"h","x":"作者：shujian345偶然","xe":"Photographer: shujian345偶然"},{"t":"img","f":"img-05","w":1080,"h":720},{"t":"h","x":"作者：HirobumiRyu","xe":"Photographer: HirobumiRyu"},{"t":"img","f":"img-06","w":1080,"h":705},{"t":"h","x":"作者：_尘光_","xe":"Photographer: _尘光_"},{"t":"h","x":"精选奖奖品","xe":"Selection Award prize"},{"t":"p","x":"托马斯同款","b":false,"xe":"The same model Thomas uses"},{"t":"p","x":"Haida NanoPro 8倍减光镜","b":false,"xe":"Haida NanoPro 8-stop ND filter"},{"t":"img","f":"img-07","w":640,"h":320},{"t":"h","x":"点评1: 天空越蓝，红云越红更好吗?","xe":"Review 1: Is bluer sky and redder red clouds always better?"},{"t":"p","x":"这次为了增加小赛的多样性和难度，托马斯提供了前后不同时刻和构图的4张原片，希望看到大家对他们的个性化选择和见解。","b":false,"xe":"This time, to increase the contest's diversity and difficulty, Thomas provided 4 originals from different times and compositions, hoping to see everyone's personalized choices and insights."},{"t":"img","f":"img-08","w":1080,"h":734},{"t":"p","x":"令人意外的是，最后三张获奖照片，都是用的第一张原图。也就是朝霞刚刚开始，还没有布满天空的时候。","b":false,"xe":"Surprisingly, the final three winning photos all used the first original - that is, when the dawn glow had just begun and hadn't yet filled the sky."},{"t":"p","x":"除开托马斯个人喜好的关系，我觉得还有以下原因：","b":false,"xe":"Aside from Thomas's personal preference, I think there are the following reasons:"},{"t":"p","x":"大场景风光摄影照片讲究层次感。层次，意味着分层和主次，也就是画面需要变化。","b":false,"xe":"Large-scene landscape photography emphasizes a sense of layering. Layering means separation and hierarchy - that is, the frame needs variation."},{"t":"p","x":"漫天红云虽然十分壮观，但全是红云反而让天空失去了变化和层次感，变成了红板一块。","b":false,"xe":"A sky full of red clouds is indeed spectacular, but when the sky is all red clouds, it loses variation and layering, becoming a flat red slab."},{"t":"img","f":"img-09","w":1000,"h":667},{"t":"p","x":"而朝霞刚开始的时候，虽然被霞光照亮的天空还没有那么红，但是其他部分天空还是冷色或者低饱和色的。","b":false,"xe":"When the dawn glow has just begun, although the sky lit by the glow isn't that red yet, the rest of the sky is still cool-toned or low-saturation."},{"t":"p","x":"在这种冷暖色相、高低饱和的对比之下，红云部分会显得更加突出。而且天空中也充满了明暗冷暖的变化，细节层次丰富。","b":false,"xe":"Under this contrast of cool-warm hues and high-low saturation, the red clouds stand out even more. The sky is also full of light-dark and cool-warm variations, rich in detail and layering."},{"t":"img","f":"img-10","w":1000,"h":667},{"t":"p","x":"其次是天空中蓝天部分的处理，这三张获奖作品也做的较好。","b":false,"xe":"Secondly, in handling the blue-sky portion of the sky, these three winning works also did well."},{"t":"p","x":"有不少投稿作品，红云很红，蓝天也很蓝，这样既有一点不自然（日出时的天空一般是微蓝，白天才会有很蓝的天空）。","b":false,"xe":"Many submissions have very red clouds and very blue sky, which is a bit unnatural (the sky at sunrise is usually slightly blue; only during the day is the sky very blue)."},{"t":"p","x":"更重要的是高饱和的蓝色抢去了高饱和的红色的存在感，互相冲突。托马斯在《风光摄影后期基础》一书中提到过，色彩需要相对搭配。","b":false,"xe":"More importantly, the high-saturation blue steals the presence of the high-saturation red, and they conflict with each other. As Thomas mentioned in the book \"The Fundamentals of Landscape Photography Post-Processing\" (《风光摄影后期基础》), colors need to be matched relatively."},{"t":"img","f":"img-11","w":816,"h":251},{"t":"p","x":"要突出一种色彩的饱和度，除了直接提升其饱和度外，还可以适当的降低其他颜色的饱和度。","b":false,"xe":"To make a color's saturation stand out, besides directly increasing its saturation, you can also appropriately reduce the saturation of other colors."},{"t":"p","x":"这两张获奖作品在蓝天的处理上都比较不错，蓝色比较舒服不刺眼。","b":false,"xe":"These two winning works handle the blue sky quite well - the blue is comfortable and not harsh."},{"t":"p","x":"而Hirobumi的作品处理的更巧妙，他直接用其他乌云素材将蓝天填充。这样天空显得更加干净统一，红云和乌云的对比效果，也比红云和蓝天更佳。","b":false,"xe":"Hirobumi's work is handled even more cleverly: he directly filled the blue sky with other dark-cloud material. This makes the sky look cleaner and more unified, and the contrast between red clouds and dark clouds is even better than between red clouds and blue sky."},{"t":"p","x":"对于后面几张红云原图，虽然天空整体层次感较差，但是局部聚焦的话，更容易突出重点和特色。","b":false,"xe":"As for the later red-cloud originals, although the overall layering of the sky is poorer, focusing on the local area makes it easier to highlight the key points and features."},{"t":"p","x":"因为索尼A7R3是较高像素的相机，即使裁成下面那样，长边仍然有1900像素，发到网上绰绰有余。","b":false,"xe":"Because the Sony A7R3 is a higher-resolution camera, even cropped as below, the long edge still has 1,900 pixels - more than enough for posting online."},{"t":"img","f":"img-12","w":1000,"h":667},{"t":"p","x":"这个构图做成暗调的话效果应该很好，不过这次没有看到相关投稿，进行了类似的大范围裁图尝试。","b":false,"xe":"This composition would look great in a dark tone, but I didn't see any submissions this time that attempted such a large-scale crop."},{"t":"h","x":"点评2: 兴趣点需要与背景分离","xe":"Review 2: The point of interest needs to be separated from the background"},{"t":"p","x":"后面几张原图，除了在天空的层次感上比前几张稍差外，前景树木的分离感也更差。","b":false,"xe":"The later originals, besides having slightly poorer sky layering than the earlier ones, also have poorer separation of the foreground trees."},{"t":"p","x":"树木作为前景兴趣点，明显是我们需要表现的。第一张原图，树木的背景是干净的水面，分离感强烈，比较引人注目。","b":false,"xe":"As the foreground point of interest, the trees are clearly what we need to express. In the first original, the trees' background is clean water, giving strong separation and drawing attention."},{"t":"p","x":"后面几张原图，树木的背景是细节同样比较复杂的岩石，树木混入其中。","b":false,"xe":"In the later originals, the trees' background is rock with equally complex detail, and the trees blend into it."},{"t":"p","x":"例如下面这张优秀作品，虽然色彩和影凋还不错，但树木和岩石混在了一起。","b":false,"xe":"For example, in the excellent work below, although the color and tonality are decent, the trees and rocks are mixed together."},{"t":"img","f":"img-13","w":1080,"h":721},{"t":"p","x":"优秀作品，作者：南京大萝卜","b":false,"xe":"Excellent work, photographer: 南京大萝卜"},{"t":"p","x":"当然后面几张原图，经过细致处理是可以把它从背景中分离开来的。","b":false,"xe":"Of course, the later originals can be separated from the background with careful processing."},{"t":"p","x":"下面这张优秀作品，作者通过压暗后面岩石，和强化树木绿色，很好的完成了后期的兴趣点分离工作，但幅度稍强，略不自然。","b":false,"xe":"In the excellent work below, the author completed the post-processing separation of the point of interest well by darkening the rocks behind and strengthening the green of the trees, but the intensity is a bit strong, slightly unnatural."},{"t":"img","f":"img-14","w":1080,"h":675},{"t":"p","x":"优秀作品，作者：行云流水","b":false,"xe":"Excellent work, photographer: 行云流水"},{"t":"h","x":"点评3: 越壮观的场景，越需要引导读者的视线","xe":"Review 3: The more spectacular the scene, the more you need to guide the viewer's eye"},{"t":"p","x":"壮观的场景，尝尝含有丰富的信息，信息量大既是优势，也是劣势，因为无关的杂乱元素也很多，而且读者不知道该看哪儿。","b":false,"xe":"Spectacular scenes often contain rich information. A large amount of information is both an advantage and a disadvantage, because there are also many irrelevant cluttered elements, and the viewer doesn't know where to look."},{"t":"p","x":"因此大场景风光，需要摄影师利用构图，色彩和影凋，对读者的视觉进行引导。强化需要突出的地方，减弱不想让读者关注的地方。","b":false,"xe":"Therefore, for large-scene landscapes, the photographer needs to use composition, color, and tonality to guide the viewer's vision - strengthening what needs to stand out and weakening what you don't want the viewer to focus on."},{"t":"p","x":"本图的前景岩石，其实是比较杂乱的。因此需要一定的处理。下面这张优秀作品，在其他方面比较突出，但对地景的处理还不够仔细。","b":false,"xe":"The foreground rocks in this image are actually quite cluttered, so they need some processing. The excellent work below stands out in other aspects, but its handling of the ground is not careful enough."},{"t":"img","f":"img-15","w":690,"h":411},{"t":"p","x":"优秀作品，作者：柠檬_树1119","b":false,"xe":"Excellent work, photographer: 柠檬_树1119"},{"t":"p","x":"我们可以看看这张获奖照片，地景进行了有效的压暗，画面主次分明。","b":false,"xe":"Let's look at this winning photo: the ground has been effectively darkened, and the frame has clear primary and secondary distinctions."},{"t":"p","x":"这张获奖照片，地景岩石处理的也很到位，既降低了其对比度和亮度，不显杂乱。","b":false,"xe":"In this winning photo, the ground rocks are also handled well - both contrast and brightness are reduced, and it doesn't look cluttered."},{"t":"p","x":"同时岩石的细节也保留的很好，不会看起来压暗的比较刻意。作者对下方几颗杂草的削弱也比较到位。","b":false,"xe":"At the same time, the details of the rocks are well preserved, so the darkening doesn't look deliberate. The author also weakens the few weeds below appropriately."},{"t":"p","x":"这张获奖照片的地景处理更加出色。大家可以观察远处岩石上突兀的斑点，和近处的地面枯枝，作者用图章工具进行处理，画面显得更加整洁。","b":false,"xe":"The ground handling of this winning photo is even more outstanding. You can observe the abrupt spots on the distant rocks and the dead branches on the near ground; the author used the clone stamp tool to process them, making the frame look tidier."},{"t":"img","f":"img-16","w":995,"h":660},{"t":"img","f":"img-17","w":1080,"h":712},{"t":"p","x":"而且作者在弱化整体岩石的同时，并不是黑色一块，而是继续利用明度拉开了岩石的纵深感。右上方的岩石有细节且较亮，左下方的岩石细节少且较暗，这样岩石就不再显的是一整块，而是有了远近关系。","b":false,"xe":"Moreover, while weakening the overall rocks, the author didn't turn them into a solid black block, but continued to use luminance to create depth among the rocks. The rocks at the upper right have detail and are brighter, while those at the lower left have less detail and are darker, so the rocks no longer appear as a single block but have near-far relationships."},{"t":"p","x":"几张获奖作品，对天空的视觉引导也处理的很好，利用后期添加光感，让右侧的天空显得更加引人注目，而且很好的提升了照片的氛围感和立体感。","b":false,"xe":"The winning works also handle the visual guidance of the sky well, using post-processing to add a sense of light, making the right side of the sky more eye-catching while greatly enhancing the photo's atmosphere and dimensionality."},{"t":"img","f":"img-18","w":1080,"h":717},{"t":"h","x":"其他优秀作品选登","xe":"Other featured excellent works"},{"t":"p","x":"除了以上作品外，下面这些作品也颇有特色。","b":false,"xe":"Besides the above works, the following ones are also quite distinctive."},{"t":"img","f":"img-19","w":690,"h":408},{"t":"p","x":"作者：路过风景遇见你","b":false,"xe":"Photographer: 路过风景遇见你"},{"t":"img","f":"img-20","w":690,"h":474},{"t":"p","x":"作者：东star","b":false,"xe":"Photographer: 东star"},{"t":"img","f":"img-21","w":1080,"h":721},{"t":"p","x":"作者：深圳小勇哥","b":false,"xe":"Photographer: 深圳小勇哥"},{"t":"img","f":"img-22","w":690,"h":460},{"t":"p","x":"作者：云中漫步ooOO","b":false,"xe":"Photographer: 云中漫步ooOO"},{"t":"img","f":"img-23","w":690,"h":695},{"t":"p","x":"作者：MelonYoung","b":false,"xe":"Photographer: MelonYoung"},{"t":"img","f":"img-24","w":1024,"h":682},{"t":"p","x":"作者：zxk小红人","b":false,"xe":"Photographer: zxk小红人"},{"t":"img","f":"img-25","w":1080,"h":571},{"t":"p","x":"作者：长桥","b":false,"xe":"Photographer: 长桥"},{"t":"p","x":"托马斯举办修图小赛的初衷，并不是为了一决高下，而是希望通过不同的后期效果，产生思路的交流和灵感的碰撞。","b":false,"xe":"Thomas's original intention in holding the photo-editing mini-contest is not to compete, but to generate exchanges of ideas and collisions of inspiration through different post-processing results."},{"t":"p","x":"获奖作品与优秀作品的评选，都具有一定的主观性。托马斯更多是想通过阐述评选理由，进行一些启发和交流。","b":false,"xe":"The selection of winning and excellent works is somewhat subjective. Thomas mainly wants to provide some inspiration and exchange by explaining the reasons for selection."},{"t":"h","x":"如果大家对这些作品，以及原图的后期处理，还有不同的观点或者思路，欢迎在留言区讨论。","xe":"If you have different views or ideas about these works and the post-processing of the originals, you're welcome to discuss them in the comments."},{"t":"p","x":"往期回顾：","b":false,"xe":"Past episodes:"},{"t":"p","x":"《同一图片修出如此多效果？修图小赛第一期获奖作品出炉！》","b":false,"xe":"\"So Many Effects from the Same Image? The Winning Works of the First Photo-Editing Mini-Contest Are Out!\""},{"t":"p","x":"《你能想到这么修吗？托马斯修图小赛第二期作品展》","b":false,"xe":"\"Can You Imagine Editing It Like This? Thomas's Photo-Editing Mini-Contest, Episode 2 Exhibition\""},{"t":"p","x":"《如何控制照片的色彩搭配，修图小赛第三期点评》","b":false,"xe":"\"How to Control Color Combinations in Photos - Photo-Editing Mini-Contest, Episode 3 Review\""},{"t":"p","x":"《摄影后期要先整体、后局部、有取舍 – 修图小赛第4期点评》","b":false,"xe":"\"Post-Processing Should Go from the Whole to the Parts, with Selection and Omission - Photo-Editing Mini-Contest, Episode 4 Review\""},{"t":"p","x":"《阴天这么修很好！修图小赛第5期点评》","b":false,"xe":"\"Overcast Days Can Be Edited Like This! Photo-Editing Mini-Contest, Episode 5 Review\""},{"t":"p","x":"《如何通过后期，赋予照片新的氛围-修图小赛第六期点评》","b":false,"xe":"\"How to Give Photos a New Atmosphere Through Post-Processing - Photo-Editing Mini-Contest, Episode 6 Review\""},{"t":"h","x":"欢迎关注@Thomas看看世界，","xe":"Follow @Thomas Chu Photo,"},{"t":"h","x":"每周学会一个摄影技能。","xe":"and learn one photography skill every week."},{"t":"h","x":"点击“阅读原文”","xe":"Click \"Read the Original\""},{"t":"h","x":"购买畅销书《风光摄影后期基础》","xe":"to purchase the best-selling book \"The Fundamentals of Landscape Photography Post-Processing\" (《风光摄影后期基础》)"}],"titleEn":"Spectacular Landscape Masterpieces Need Visual Guidance Even More - Photo-Editing Mini-Contest, Episode 7 Review"}